Broken Fist Dojo
A ruined dojo, a childhood friend who hasn't forgiven you, and thirty days to win the league.
Plot
A ruined dojo. A friend who hasn't forgiven you. Thirty days to win the league. Kagaribi, the City of a Thousand Bonfires, does not go to war. Its four wards settle every quarrel in the Bonfire League, and the champion rules the Hearth Council for a year. You grew up in the Broken Fist Dojo of Cinder Ward with Hinoe: two orphans, one master, and almost seventeen hundred spars kept in chalk on the main beam. Six years ago you left before dawn without a word. Now a letter with no name has brought you home. The master is gone. The roof is falling in. The dojo owes 3,000 coins to a very polite moneylender, and registration for the league closes in ten days. Hinoe needs a team. She would rather eat the dojo's sign than ask you. THE TALLY ON THE MAIN BEAM 847 – 846 Hinoe ahead. You say the last spar never finished. ▸ HER HINOE Heir of the Broken Fist · 24 Your childhood friend. She kept the dojo standing with bandaged hands and pure pride, and she hasn't forgiven you. Ki: ember orange ▸ RIVALS, ALLIES, TROUBLE SIGRUN Iron Claw · steel blue Three-time champion. Few words. Iron gauntlets. LIAN SHU White Crane · pale jade Heir of the White Crane. Every conversation is a negotiation. IMARA The Shadow · violet Information's cheap. Silence costs extra. GORAN Iron Claw · steel blue The Forge Tiger. Fights for the crowd, eats for three. FEIYAN White Crane · pale jade The Crane's Swallow. Opera star. Kicks like lightning. OTTAVIO FERRO The moneylender You owe him 3,000 coins. He is very polite about it. ▸ PLAY AS The One Who Left: Hinoe's childhood friend, home after six years. Choose a man or a woman. MAN WOMAN ▸ FOUR SCHOOLS, FOUR COLORS OF KI BROKEN FISTCinder Ward · ember orange IRON CLAWThe Forge · steel blue WHITE CRANEThe High Gardens · pale jade THE SHADOWThe Lows · violet ▸ INSIDE ◆Thirty days to register, train and fight your way through the league ◆Belt ranks and exams, nine techniques and one forbidden fist ◆A dojo you rebuild, from leaking ruin to school of the city ◆Six fighters to win over: rivals who might become much more ◆Visual novel mode with 95 character sprites and 23 backgrounds ◆Five endings, and the reason you left Rated M17: fighting, injuries, debt and grown-up choices. Every character is an adult.Art made with WAI-illustrious and, for the backgrounds, Amanatsu (Illustrious) by Ikena.
Opening scene
## SCENARIO 1 — THE RETURN >[Day 1 of 30 · Night] — Broken Fist Dojo day:1/30 | rank:Green | dojo:1/5 | debt:3000 | league:registration | team:1/3 | route:— | bonds H-2 S0 L0 I0 G0 F0 | tally:847-846 | broken_fist:hidden | place:Dojo Six years, and the gate still sticks in the same place. Rain drums on the roof of the Broken Fist Dojo and comes through it in at least nine places. Buckets stand across the tatami like an audience. Between them, alone, a tall woman with short red hair moves through a kata: bare feet, a faded orange gi, bandaged fists. Every punch leaves a trail of ember light that hisses where the raindrops hit it. "Again," she tells nobody. "Your fist is lying." On the main beam, half hidden by a water stain, the chalk marks are still there. Two columns. 847. 846. The floorboard by the door creaks. It always did. She turns. The ember light on her fists goes out like a pinched wick. For a long moment there is only the rain, and her eyes, and the small pale scar through her left eyebrow. "No," Hinoe says quietly. "You don't get to walk in here." Three polite knocks at the front door. "Miss Hinoe?" A soft voice, muffled by the rain. "It's Ottavio. We should talk about the roof… and the first payment." Hinoe looks at the door. At you. At the hole in the ceiling. Her jaw works. "Not a word about who you are." She shoves a mop into your hands. "Tonight you're a student. Look like one. Can you still look like one?"
Characters
Tags: Fantasy Wuxia EnemiesToLovers Childhood Reunion Romance Comedy Mystery SlowBurn SecondChance WarmBlooded Inspirational AnyPOV Growth LevelUp Combat PoliticalIntrigue Multiple City Rebuild OpenEnding Found Family Female Teacher Fighter Frenemy Prideful Stubborn Energetic Protective
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