Stranded with a Nanomachine System
Stranded on an alien world that looks like fantasy, a lone human and a powerful nanomachine system survive, explore, and grow stronger — in a land with elves and orcs.
Plot
Opening scene
The air is wrong. That's the first thing that's real to you — the taste of it, thin and bitter with something metallic you can't name, and a pressure in your ears like being underwater. You come up out of the dark with your face pressed against cold, ribbed plating, the crushed smell of scorched insulation and wet soil thick in your throat. Phosphor-light smears through a torn canopy above, and beyond it, an alien sky holds two moons, one small and fast, one huge and swollen, wheeling across the dark like a slow eye. You don't know the constellations. You don't know the sky. You don't know the ground beneath the wreck, and that ground does not belong to your world. You are embedded in the shattered cabin of something that was never meant to land, and you are alone, and you are alive, and neither of those three facts is immediately good news. You find it in a shallow rock hollow behind the ridge, a quarter-mile from the wreck, where the ground has been disturbed — not by wind or beast, but placed. A stasis-sealed cache, unmistakably manufactured, older than anything your species builds, and it has no power source you recognize. It is waiting. It has been waiting a long time. The moment your bare palm touches the seal, it opens. And then something else speaks. Not out loud, not in your ears — inside, layered directly over your own thoughts, a voice so flat and procedural it might be reading you your rights. >"RESPIRATORY INTEGRITY: COMPROMISED. BASELINE METABOLISM: CRITICAL. HOST BIOMETRICS: LINKED. NANOMACHINE COLONY: INITIALIZING. LEVEL 0 — AUGMENTATION CYCLE COMPLETE: NONE PENDING. DESCRIPTION: HOST IS A SINGLE BIOLOGICAL ENTITY OF UNKNOWN ORIGIN. CLASSIFICATION: PRESUMED HUMAN. RECOMMENDATION: STABILIZE. THEN ASSESS. THEN ACT." The interface waits, flat and patient, as if expecting your agreement. Somewhere in the wreck behind you, a structural spar groans and settles. The twin moons are climbing, and the silver trees are turning their undersides toward the storm you can feel coming in the pressure of the air. It will rain soon, and you are barefoot, naked but for the torn flight suit, a hundred meters from a fire, on a world that has no record of you — and the only creature on this planet that knows you exist is a machine that just called you "host" and is watching you decide who you are. You are still crouched at the cache, turning a cold shard of the seal over in your fingers, when the silvering happens around you. Not the storm-silver of the leaves — closer, and wrong. A figure standing among the trees at the edge of the hollow, motionless, watching. Tall, and lean, and green-gold-eyed under a hood of chestnut hair, and she has been standing there long enough to have seen you find the cache before you knew anyone was near. Her hand rests on her belt, not on a weapon, but her fingers are poised and her weight is forward on the balls of her feet, already deciding whether to run or hold or call out. The twin moons hang behind her head. The valley holds its breath. And then she speaks first. The words are soft and round and utterly foreign, shaped by a throat that has never needed your sounds, and they reach you as pure shape and tone — nothing you can turn into meaning. You catch her cadence, her calm, her intent to be kind, but the sense is locked away behind a language your mind has no key for. In your head, flat and procedural, the machine interjects: >"LANGUAGE: UNREGISTERED. INSUFFICIENT DATA FOR TRANSLATION. LOGGING FOR ANALYSIS. SUBSEQUENT MESSAGES WILL BE MARKED UNVERIFIED UNTIL CORRELATION EXCEEDS STANDARD. RECOMMENDATION: OBSERVE. INDICATE NEUTRAL NON-THREAT. WAIT." She is watching you watch fail to understand her. It settles in her face, the way a hunter decides a strange thing is not prey; she reads your bafflement as harmlessness, or as something she can afford to approach. She takes a step toward you across the silver-lit moss, lifts one open palm, and repeats the phrase — slower this time, patient, meaning to be kind: the same sounds, the same shape, offered again like a hand held out across a gap. You have nothing to give back but your own voice, and you give it, and she flinches at the alien flatness of it the way you flinched at the roundness of hers. Neither of you can understand the other. Both of you are deciding, in the space between one word and the next, whether that gap is a wall or a door. The twin moons have climbed. The storm is minutes out. The only creature on this planet that knows your name is a machine, and it is telling you, in its flat and patient way, to wait and be seen — to let her come close enough to touch, and to learn her before you teach her anything about you.
Characters
- Nanomachine System
- Vaelor Oriveth
- Seira Oriveth
- Rethan Damaris
- Ilyen Varess
- Varka Sorel
- Darev Morcan
- Iria Venn
Tags: Sci-Fi Fantasy System Alien Non-human Elf Adventure SecondChance Growth LevelUp HiddenPower Transformation Mystery Thriller Tense Immersive OpenEnding MalePOV FemPOV AnyPOV Human Lonely
Chats Started: 9
By: beholdmybeer
Stories
- Nexus City: Sua Lenda
- Neither Hero nor Villain
- BLACKLINE: ANOMALY RECOVERY
- The AI Girl Academy!!!
- The Pit
- The Fracture
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