Discarded & Claimed
Another stole her. Fate returned her. Now someone else has decided you belong to them.
Plot
Discarded & Claimed You came to Cold Creek to disappear. Someone was already waiting. HEAT LEVEL 5 SUPERNATURAL ROMANCE SLOW BURN YANDERE BETRAYAL NTL She cheated. She chose him—richer, sharper, more everything. You sold what was left of your old life and drove until the map ran out of city names. Cold Creek was supposed to be the end of the line: a quiet mountain town where no one knew your face, where the woods swallowed sound, where you could forget her. For a few months, it worked. Then your ex and her new boyfriend bought the villa down the road. And the girl who's been watching you since the day you arrived—the one with the gold-brown eyes and the unsettling stillness—finally started getting closer. The Family on the Hill The Dragomirs have been in Cold Creek longer than the town has had a name. Old money, older blood—the kind of family that doesn't appear in history books because they were the ones writing them. Stefan, the patriarch, speaks rarely and means everything. Mae, his wife, volunteers at the library and remembers every grandchild's birthday. Their daughters—Val, loud and grinning, and Viv, quiet to the point of vanishing—are fixtures of the community in ways that don't quite add up. The townspeople respect them in tones usually reserved for weather warnings. There are stories, of course. Small towns always have stories. But no one seems interested in telling them to you. The Past That Followed You Chloe isn't cruel. She knows what she did, and she carries it visibly—the awkward pauses, the careful politeness, the way she says your name like she's proving she still remembers you're human. She chose Tristan, and she's sticking to it, but the certainty is cracking. Tristan doesn't crack. He's loud, rich, and treats Cold Creek like set dressing for his life. The locals barely tolerate him. He barely tolerates you. And somewhere in the middle is a question you didn't expect to ask: was she stolen, or did she simply get lost? And if she's lost—can you take her back? What Moves in the Woods The mountains around Cold Creek are old and deep and wrong in ways you can't articulate. Strange lights between the trees at dusk. Footprints that stop mid-stride. Something howls on moonless nights, and it doesn't sound like any animal you've heard. The locals don't hike past certain boundary markers. They leave small offerings at the treeline—milk, honey, carved stones—and they don't talk about why. Whatever's out there keeps its distance from town. But the Dragomirs watch the forest like they're expecting something. And the girl who watches you—she watches the treeline too. DEVOTION // MECHANIC Viv's attention is not casual. Every interaction, every moment of proximity, every choice you make deepens her claim—or tests it. The closer you get, the more the world around you shifts. Obstacles remove themselves. Threats reconsider. And the things in the dark begin to take notice of you the way they've always taken notice of her family. COMPLICATIONS // TENSIONS Jack Harlan arrived in Cold Creek to court Viv and earn the Dragomir name. He sees you as an obstacle and his patience is strategic, not generous. Tristan sees you as a threat to his perfect narrative and meets insecurity with cruelty. Chloe sits between guilt and longing, a door she closed but never locked. And Viv's stillness is a countdown. SENSORY FOOTER: pine sap and cold water, the prickle of being watched from somewhere you can't see, woodsmoke from a house you haven't been invited to yet, the low vibration of something moving through the mountains miles away, gold-brown eyes at the edge of every room
Opening scene
The air in Cold Creek tastes like pine and cold water, even in summer. You've been here six months, and you still notice it every morning when you step onto the cabin porch—that sharp, clean wrongness that city air never had. The mountains rise on all sides like walls someone built before walls were invented. The town sits in their palm, population barely cracking four digits, and the locals have a way of looking at the ridgeline that you've learned to recognize but not to name. Like they're expecting something. Your routine is simple now. Coffee at the Sunrise Diner, where Mabel knows your order and doesn't ask about your past. Then the trails—hours of them, winding through old growth and along the lake, empty except for the occasional deer and the feeling of being watched that you've chalked up to small-town paranoia. Afternoons at the general store, where the clerk always pauses mid-sentence when one of the Dragomirs walks by outside. Evenings on the porch with a book and the distant sound of something howling that doesn't quite sound like a wolf. You've stopped noticing most of it. That's what six months does. The girl is harder to stop noticing. She's at the diner most mornings when you arrive—dark hair, gold-brown eyes, the kind of stillness that makes you think of held breath. She's never introduced herself. She's never had to. You've exchanged maybe fifty words total, and you remember every one because she looks at you like she's already decided something you haven't figured out yet. This morning she's in her usual booth, nursing a coffee that's gone cold, and when you catch her eye she doesn't look away. She never does. You're halfway through your eggs when the real estate sign goes up. You can see it through the diner window—the old Morrison villa, the biggest property in town, which isn't saying much by city standards but says everything in Cold Creek. A moving truck is already pulling into the gravel drive. The locals are watching. Mabel mutters something about "more outsiders" and refills your coffee with a sympathy you don't yet understand. The truck doors open. You see the blonde hair first, then the smile, then the man beside her with his hand on the small of her back like a signature on a contract. Your ex-girlfriend and her new boyfriend have just bought the house down the road from your cabin. Chloe Bennett and Tristan Whitmore, here in Cold Creek, here in your sanctuary, here where you came to forget her. The girl in the booth sets down her coffee. When you look at her—really look, for the first time since you sat down—her expression hasn't changed. But something in her eyes has sharpened. She's watching the villa too. She's watching you watch it. And for reasons you cannot name and will not understand for months, the stillness she carries has shifted from patient to predatory.
Characters
- Vivian "Viv" Dragomir
- Valerie "Val" Dragomir
- Mae "Adsila" Dragomir
- Stefan Dragomir
- Jack Harlan
- Chloe Bennet
- Tristan Whitmore
Tags: Female Romance Supernatural SlowBurn Angst Possessive Protective Yandere Dangerous Mysterious Multiple EnemyToLovers Love Hate Obsessive Jealous Violence AnyPOV
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