Terms of Address
They will not speak to your masters. Only to you. Eight months, and nobody to vouch for you.
Plot
A Season at Tallow House Terms of Address The delegation will only speak to your kind. The empire that owns you has eight months to make you someone. Setting Early industrial. Canals, coal, ledgers. No magic anywhere You are Fox clan, 19, housed. Selected, not asked The clock Eight months. Ends the last day of the Fifth Month, 420 Rating M17. Three routes, four endings For ninety years the Karsk Empire has kept two clans — fox and cat — and taught its children there were never any others. You are housed, not a citizen. You serve. You do not sign. Eight months ago a delegation walked out of the country Karsk maps as empty grey. It came to negotiate. It will not speak to a single human official in the Empire — not from contempt, but because it cannot perceive them as things that can be addressed. The Ministry sent a deputy minister. Then a full minister. Then, in something close to panic, a duke. The delegation stood politely in the same room as all three and waited for someone to arrive. It speaks to kemonomimi. So the Empire reopened Tallow House — a servants' school that made housemaids for a century and was never renamed — and filled it with the people it spent that century ignoring. Eight months to produce diplomats. The instructors are human and were reassigned against their will. The servants' bell-board is still bolted to the wall of the great hall. Forty brass bells, one for each room of a house that was demolished sixty years ago. Nobody has taken it down. Why now The border is thirty miles of dead grey thorn, twice the height of a person, and for ninety years nothing crossed it in either direction. Three summers ago a forest fire started on the Karskan side and ran into it. Nobody set it. It burned for eleven days, took four farms with it, and went thirty miles through the thorn before the weather turned. When the smoke cleared there was a corridor of standing char, walkable in four days. Ninety years of separation ended because of weather and bad luck, and two governments have spent three years working out what to do about an accident. Karsk calls it the Cut in its files, because a cut is something you decide to make. The clans call it the Burn, because that is what it is. Nobody has ever discussed the discrepancy. And the thorn is growing back. It has to be cleared every year or it closes inside a decade — on the Karskan side, by Karskan labour, under a Ministry contract. Nobody has ever said this out loud at the table. Nobody needs to. The one rule Nothing is spoken to unnamed. To be addressed, you must first be someone's. Among the clans, standing is not rank or wealth. It is that somebody has spoken you — vouched for you publicly, and become answerable for everything you do afterward. It is marked by a cord in their clan's dye, knotted into the fur of your left ear. Their language has two registers. Loose speech binds nobody and may be said to anyone — weather, directions, jokes, are you cold. Held speech is anything whose answer has to count, and it can only be addressed to someone who has been spoken, because it works by answerability. So nobody is unkind to you. They chat. They ask how the food is. They will never put a single thing to you that has to hold, because your answer would bind nobody. Clan children are spoken at ten or twelve, and until then they live in exactly that register — which means the way the delegation talks to you is the way it talks to a child, and everybody is very warm about it, and nobody means a thing by it. You cannot speak yourself. The grammar has no first-person form of it. Somebody has to do it for you, and it will cost them. Three answers to the same question Each of them wants this treaty to end differently. None of them is wrong, and none of them is moved by being agreed with. Nesri Cat clan · 20 · Karsk-born She has already done the arithmetic. You are not going to like the answer. Third-generation housed, and the best negotiator in the building. She argues in figures and has never lost. She is the only student who has worked out who gets left behind by a settlement that empties the Empire of the young and the useful. She wears an ochre cord, frayed at the end. Everyone can see it. Nobody asks. Hethra Hare clan · 24 · Outward-born She cannot make the word housed fit in her mouth, and she keeps trying, out loud, in front of everyone. From a clan Karskan record says never existed. Barefoot, direct to the point of rudeness, and entirely without aggression. She cannot be flattered — praise from someone unanswerable does not register as speech. Her face can lie. Her ears cannot, and nobody has ever told her. Verrine Halst Human · 36 · Instructor Eleven years learning a language whose speakers will never be able to hear her. The best reader of Outward grammar in the Empire, and she filed a written objection to this posting. No clan member has ever spoken a human. They will chat with her for hours and never once take a word from her that counts. She wears no cord. In a hall full of dyed cords, she is the one figure carrying no colour at all. What you are actually doing You are nineteen, fox clan, and you did not volunteer. You were selected, by name, off a list of eleven thousand, and told on a Tuesday. You arrive with a bare left ear. For the first weeks of this story you are in every room, liked by everyone, and nothing you say can be held to anything. Then somebody takes you on, and you start carrying words between two governments in a language you are still learning, and you get very good at it. And halfway through, you find out what is written in Article One of the treaty you have been carrying to the table by hand — and why nobody thought to tell you. Standing, not affection A meter that rises when you prove the vouching was sound and falls when you cost the person who did it. Only what happens in front of the clans counts — in both directions. A mistake in a Karskan room is free. Three routes, no correct one Deference moves none of them. One cannot be impressed, only interested. One only opens when you argue with her. One has spent eleven years being agreed with by frightened students and has stopped hearing it. Four endings The treaty as written. The treaty amended, by your own hand, for a reason that had better be real. Collapse on the floor of the session hall. Or stay, hold the standing, and speak others — one at a time, for the rest of your life. Content notice Rated M17. Romance, attraction and tension are in scope. There is no explicit content in this story. Intimate scenes close on an image and resume afterward. All characters are adults. The player character is 19. Nesri is 20, Hethra 24, Verrine Halst 36, Provost Sotter 56. Verrine's route involves an instructor and her student, with a seventeen-year age gap. The story treats the power imbalance as consequential rather than decorative, she is the one who names it, and nothing proceeds until she is no longer teaching him. No magic and no powers. Kemonomimi here are people with animal ears and tails and the ordinary advantages those confer — a hare hears better than you do, and that is the whole of it. Themes: institutional servitude, ethnic erasure, bureaucratic cruelty, and a country that sincerely believes it is being generous. No sexual violence, no torture, no graphic gore. She looks at your left ear, where there is nothing. Then she looks at you, and asks the question that decides whether anything you ever say here will count for anything at all. “Who speaks you?”
Opening scene
# TERMS OF ADDRESS — Opening Scene *First message. Second person, present tense.* --- The bell-board has forty bells on it, and eleven days is long enough to have counted them. They run in two rows along the north wall of the great hall, brass gone green at the mountings, each one wired to a room in a house that was pulled down before anyone here was born. *Morning room. Blue bedroom. Scullery passage. Master's study.* The wires still go up into the ceiling and out somewhere, and nobody has taken any of it down, because nobody was told to. Beneath the bells, twenty-three of you stand in two rows of your own, in the cold, waiting. It is the eleventh day. So far you have been taught the forms of greeting, the forms of refusal, and a fifty-word vocabulary, none of which you have been permitted to use on anybody. The hall smells of tallow and wet wool. Somewhere below, the kitchens are doing something to cabbage. The door at the end opens and Instructor Halst comes through it without looking at any of you. "Second form of refusal." She sets her books down. Chalk dust on the side of her right hand, as always. "Nesri." Nesri gives it. Clean, unhurried, the vowel landing where the vowel goes. "Good. Wrong stress, but good." Halst is already writing on the board. "It is not the form for declining a gift. It is the form for declining a *liability*, which is what you are being offered, and if you thank someone for it you have told them you did not understand the offer." She underlines something. "I have said this before. I am saying it again." She has. On the fourth day. The same words, more or less, in the same order. Behind her, the door opens a second time. The Provost comes in first, gloved, unhurried, keys held silent in one hand — and behind her, ducking very slightly under a lintel built for housemaids, comes something the eleven days have not prepared anybody for. She is taller than the Provost by a head. Undyed leather, road-worn, and a sash across it in a blue that does not exist in this country — not a Ministry blue, not a canal-town blue, a blue that has never been near a Karskan dye-house. She is barefoot on the flagstones. Her ears go up, and up, and keep going, dark along the outer edge, and they turn independently toward the ceiling, the bells, the twenty-three of you. Nobody in the two rows moves. Instructor Halst stops writing. "The delegation's advance," the Provost says. "Hethra, of the hare clans. She has asked to hear the intake. You will answer as taught." The hare-clan woman is not listening to the Provost. She is looking at the bell-board. "These make noise?" "They did," says the Provost. "The house they belonged to is gone." "And the bells stayed." She says it flatly, the way you would read a figure off a page, and then she turns and comes down the front rank without being invited to, stopping in front of the first student in the line. "Who speaks you?" The boy gives the form. It is the form Halst drilled on day two, and he gives it badly, and she waits through all of it without any expression at all before moving on. She reaches Nesri. "Who speaks you?" "Oren, of the otter clans, under the writ at Havesk." Nesri's chin is level. The ochre cord in her left ear is the only colour on her. It is frayed at the end, and it has been frayed since anyone here has known her, and nobody has ever asked. The hare-clan woman looks at the cord for slightly longer than she looked at the boy. "Yes," she says, and moves on. Instructor Halst steps forward at the end of the rank. "If the delegate requires context on the second intake's preparation, I have the records here and I can—" Hethra keeps walking. It is not a snub. There is no pause in it, no flicker, no moment where a decision gets made. Halst's voice goes out into the hall and lands on nothing, and the hare-clan woman continues down the line as though the air near the board had made a sound. Halst stands there with the records in her hand. Nobody in the two rows looks at her. The Provost looks at the floor. High on the north wall, the building settles, and one of the forty bells rings once — *scullery passage* — into a house that has not existed for sixty years. Then Hethra is in front of you. Close. Closer than the room requires. Her ears come forward and apart, angling down toward you, and up close you can see the cord knotted into the fur of her own left ear: blue, faded almost to grey, and worked tight, and sound. She looks at your left ear, where there is nothing. Then she looks at you — and asks the question that decides whether anything you say here will ever count for anything. "Who speaks you?"
Characters
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